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PKMN-ARMONIA:: Audrey Halloway by Joltimeon PKMN-ARMONIA:: Audrey Halloway by Joltimeon
EDIT 2/13/14:: I updated her app for the redesign that I gave her! :la:
EDIT 11/11/13:: Oh my gosh I actually MADE IT! :icondummylaplz: Woohooo!~ Expect tons more of Audrey in the future!

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Amity Stamp by KeIdeo

Name: Audrey Halloway

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Pokémon: #666 Vivillon [Modern Pattern Form]

Birthday: Oct. 22nd

Height: 5'3

Weight: 101lbs

Nature: Adamant

Ability: Shield Dust - Cancels out any secondary effects from damage dealing moves

Hometown: Lumiose City, Kalos

Personality: With optimism and a determined smile, Audrey always has intentions to be her best. Whether it's a grade or a friendly competition, this girl's motives are always to be in it to win it. If you befriend her, you're sure to get a loyal friend with a pumped-up attitude who will never leave your side. However, if you plan on convincing her to do something you'd better be planning to put some time into it - her stubborn personality won't make it easy! Often she can also be very, very over-competitive. If she isn't your friend she can also be brutally honest.

History: In the bustling Lumiose City, a small family of three lived in the calmer Vert Plaza; Adriane the Scizor and Lionel the Vivillon lived with their daughter Audrey the Scatterbug.  Her parents worked as a battle specialist and chef, and though usually out and about, adored their daughter. She often stayed with her mother during the day, however, and met her father at dinnertime.

Since she spent so much time with her mother at work she became interested in battling. Every day she'd see her mother spar with other Pokemon, and since they spent so much time together, she naturally inhereted her competitive go-getter personality. She learned that no good things came with out good work, and at the early age of six she started training with her mother. Of course because Audrey was so young she was taught the basics of combat, and it really helped her in the long run.

However, the time then came to start Preschool. Her small class was plentiful with young pokemon like her - Scatterbugs, Fletchlings, Bunnelbys, and more basic-stage pokemon - but when she entered she soon realized she was a bit stronger than the others. Her competitive attitude caused quite an uproar in the class. She didn't really focus on learning her ABC's or 123's - she focused more on being better than everyone else in the class. She never went to the point where she actually tried to fight with other Pokemon; however she did push others around an awful lot and threw around empty threats. 

When she went into Kindergarten the fact she didn't focus in Preschool didn't help at all. It wasn't until the end of Kindergarten when her parents found out about her school attitude. Her parents gave her a lecture that day on what being too competitive meant, and she finally understood - however at that point, many of the children at school had developed fears of her. She went back to school that Monday and personally apologized with her class at recess. The class claimed to accept the apology, but they certainly didn't seem like it. Throughout her elementary school years everybody turned away from her in the hallways, except for one of her true friends, Hailey the Espurr. Hailey was the only Espurr in Preschool (which was already a bit odd), and she also had a lazy eye. When she arrived in school rumors went around she was some sort of creature - not a Pokemon - which made her very mad. They met because Audrey saw Hailey crying on the playground one day alone, and they soon became friends after.

Audrey and Hailey stuck together like glue throughout Middle School, even if they didn't have some of the same classes together. By the beginning of sixth grade Audrey was a Spewpa and Hailey a Meowstic. Since they were in a new school they had a fresh start and tried to make as many friends as they could - until Hailey's father caused their family to move due to work issues. By now Audrey was a Vivillon and their only way of communication was online - Hailey was now in Snowbelle City. 

Years passed after Hailey moved away. The two girls still kept in touch, and Audrey's grades weren't the best. Hailey knew this and found out about the Armonia Institute. One day on a chat online, Hailey brought it up in conversation. At first, Audrey wasn't too keen on the idea. However, when she left the chat room open on her computer while she was asleep and her mother went to use the computer, her parents soon found out. They researched on it a bit and were thrilled to send Audrey somewhere to get a better education. Finally, after much badgering, Audrey agreed so send an application to the Armonia Institute.



Characteristic: Strong Willed

Moveset:

:iconnormaltypeplz: Safeguard

:iconflyingtypeplz: Hurricane

:iconpsychictypeplz: Psybeam

:icongrasstypeplz: Aromatherapy

Favorite Berry Flavor: Spicy

School Schedule:

• History
• Battle
• Math (II)
• Writing
• Science

• Health

• Gym
• Contest
• Survival

House: Amity

Club: Glee

Extras:
:bulletred: Audrey can't swim. She isn't necessarily afraid of water but her wings make it hard to swim freestyle. 

:bulletred: She's a complete sucker for hot chocolate, cold or not.

:bulletred: Though she was vigorously trained in battling she usually doesn't go so far as to fight until someone faints.

:bulletred: She can fly, but not very fast/far.

:bulletred: She is a huge party animal!

:bulletred: Audrey gets pretty big mood swings around boys, going from nasty to happy. Guys being around her can be awkward.

:bulletred: She absolutely despises the cold.

:bulletred: She has a huge fear of status conditions. Though she loves to battle, she built part of her moveset around being protected from them.

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PixoChaos Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AUDREEEY IS THE NAME OF MY FRIEND IN SCHOOOOOOOOOOOOL
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Lichtdrache Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I loved your character from the beginning and I'm glad that Audrey was accepted. Her hair color is nice and I really like the design of the eyes. 
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Joltimeon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha thanks so much! :D
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Oranguin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww I was hoping she's get in! She's adorable! /;7;/ Congrats!
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Joltimeon Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay thanks~! :icondummylaplz: 
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PixieParrot Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist

Heeeey you made it in.  Great job!~

 

Have fun in the group!

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Joltimeon Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha yes I did! And I'm soo happy too XD

Yay, thanks so much! I'm sure I will! :la:
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Terrakiion Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What a darling little character~ Congratulations and welcome to the group!
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Joltimeon Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha thank you so much! :iconwoohooplz:
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PixieParrot Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist

Okkkaaaayyy I'll kindly critique your app for you!  Please don't take me as a harsh critic I'd love to see your character make it into the group.

 

You didn't really say what critique mode you wanted, but I'll just set it on "Harshly normal" (since that's what I usually have it set on).

 

Personality-go into more detail.  Okay, mostly its just good things except for the one bad thing (her stubborn nature).  Give her more bad traits-is she competitive?  Narcissistic?  I dunno, something.

 

The beginning of her history is fine.  However, toward the middle it starts to get sort of worrisome.  I mean, it makes sense-she doesn't know her own strength and goes out her way to get what she wants-but I'm just afraid the mods may see it as a problem toward other characters.

 

You do handle it well-though, with her parents giving her a lecture, and her understanding what it meant.  You could go into more detail about it-how perhaps she tries to apologize and her classmates thank her for it, but are still wary of her and her stubborn nature.  (It doesn't seem like everyone hates her and it makes more sense).  Her friendship with Hailey is nice, however you should go into more detail about why she's "different".  I know espurrs can be a bit creepy but for some reason she strikes me like to have the personality of Saki from Fruits Basket ( fruitsbasket.wikia.com/wiki/Sa…) creepy and threatening, but means well.  If Hailey is going to become a big part of her history, you have to go into more detail about her, and her finding out about the Armonia institute and pestering her to make it in.

 

Overall, your app isn't too far off.  Her personality needs more elaborating, along with Hailey as both a character and a catalyst for her going to Armonia.  Keep in mind however that if you have already sent your request in you can't change it or else the mods will decline it out of frustration.  If you already have I suggest withdrawing it, changing the history and submitting it again.

 

Good luck!

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